1. adventure应改为adventurer
2. asleep 应改为sleep
3.word应改为work
4.even....but
5.look改为looks
1.had been---was
2. asleep-sleeping
3. that--which
4. that-the
5. look--looks
6. looking-looked
7. everybody前加so
8. helped-helps
1、中间要有‘and’
2、asleep-----sleeping
3、little-----bit,that-----which
4、?
5、look-----looks
6、'his eyes'后面加were
7、everybody前面加so
8、?
2.asleep--sleeping
3,that--which
4'was--being
5.look改为looks
7.everybody 前加so